Anyone want to help me with my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Columbia University
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<p>I just finished the first draft of my essay, and I'm almost done with my edits.</p>

<p>Please no one from 2014, and preferably those who are going to Columbia next year. This will be my essay for ED. </p>

<p>I just want helpful comments and suggestions, please! </p>

<p>And I know it's long, but I just wanted to get all the words down first and then trim it later.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a gander for you (I already attend Columbia, so no problems.)
Drop me a PM.</p>

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<p>Welcome to the party, PL. Where’d you transfer from?</p>

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<p>pm me, I’m an english major</p>