Anyone want to look over a potential transfer's essay? Please!

<p>So I've been working on the essay for the Common App. transfer prompt (Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.) for the past few days, and I am so frustrated! I just don't know what to think of it. </p>

<p>An outside perspective would be FANTASTIC, especially since I'll be giving it to the profs. writing my recommendations soon. I don't want to give them a bad impression of my reasons for transferring!</p>

<p>Bump…</p>

<p>I would edit essays in return.</p>