Anyone want to look over my Mount Holyoke Supplement?

<p>It's only two paragraphs.</p>

<p>And if you're feeling extra generous, I am looking for people to look over my Bryn Mawr essay as well.</p>

<p>I'm just looking for a critique of the quality of the writing, but a grammar check would be appreciated as well.</p>

<p>ill do both.. just pm them over. and make sure to let me know the questions.</p>

<p>Hit me up if you want.</p>

<p>I'll comment on both of them.</p>

<p>Claire, your inbox is full. Could you empty it? I can't reply to you.</p>

<p>How many words were your two paragraphs? They don’t specify and mine is like 4 short-ish paras right now of 400 words and I’m a bit concerned that I’m not following their guideline of “one or two paragraphs”.</p>