<p>Hi guys! Just finished my rough draft of my common application essay (my school's college counseling office wants everyone to have a rough draft by May 2). I feel that I have a really gripping theme, and I was hoping people would want to read it and give me feedback, I really want to reach the reader emotionally, and convey how much of an impact this experience has had on my life, but since this is a rough draft I'm looking for any critiques of my writing. If you want to read the essay, just comment here and I'll pm it to you! </p>
<p>I’ll read it for you, send it on over.</p>
<p>Sure. PM me :)</p>
<p>If you are willing to, I’ll gladly read it if you pm me</p>
<p>I’d love to, just PM it to me</p>
<p>Sounds interesting. I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Wow, thanks a lot all! I pm’d the message out… I didn’t pm it to those of you who haven’t applied yet, for privacy purposes. Thanks for offering though, its nothing personal, its just you never know.</p>