<p>Hey everyone! I shortened up my Common App essay and I want to see if it has retained its quality. Would anyone be willing to read the shortened version (573 words) and let me know what they think about it by tomorrow (Yale), thursday (Stanford), or Friday (Chicago)?</p>
<p>Thanks!
-Lee</p>
<p>Sure!</p>
<p>I'd like to read some juice.</p>
<p>If you dont find anyone who is a professional, I could help.</p>
<p>Sure, you can PM it on over. For the record, I'm not applying to any of those colleges. Those would probably be all reaches for me.... except for maybe Chicago.</p>
<p>I'll read it. :)</p>
<p>Send it over- I can look it over for you</p>
<p>Ill check it out sir.</p>