<p>heheh.. but we all know that real Australian men don't have feelings. They prefer rugby and fighting.</p>
<p>Oh and another thing is Aussies don't keep pet koalas. They roast them and eat them.</p>
<p>Hey Jerk, guess what - I just moved out from Canberra. Best decision we ever made too, that place was a real ****hole. I liked Sydney and Queensland though, they were awesome. Maybe I'll come back and visit Down Under one day, when I start missing it.</p>
<p>Yeah, Canberra is where we send our politicians. I'm from Sydney, but you should consider visiting Melbourne.</p>
<p>What were you doing in Canberra?</p>
<p>Dad's job, but he's not a politician.</p>
<p>I'd like to think he was working at Questacon or the AIS.</p>
<p>Yeah he used to serve food in the little tea place in Questacon. The job prospects were fantastic, so off we flew to Australia.</p>
<p>No his real job is an academic at ANU. How come you know about Canberra? Going there on holiday... ouch.</p>
<p>i would be happy to read it over for you and give you my opinion since this is my area of stength. just pm me when you have a chance!</p>
<p>send it to me as well</p>
<p>I've been to Canberra on a few occasions. Questacon was probably the highlight, but Cockington Green came a close second.</p>
<p>yeah send it to me</p>
<p>Me, too. PM me as well.</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>
<p>pm to me,please.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>Btw ,koala is sooooooooooo cute!!</p>
<p>.. i can read it ..</p>
<p>I have received enough responses on the essay (>10) and have implemented many of the suggestions. Unfortunately, I probably won't even be submitting it because I am unhappy with it in general. Even still, thanks for everyone's time.</p>
<p>Update: actually, I sent a different essay via PM to all of the above users on this page. It is a totally diff essay, though.</p>
<p>WHAT!!! Why aren't you sending it? The one about the picnic? Jeeeeeeeez... my time is precious, kid! ;) Nah only kidding. It was good practice for my editing skills.</p>
<p>I'll read the new essay if you still need suggestions!</p>
<p>Hey Ace is Back, well, you gave me many positive suggestions and in fact I saved each reveision (with different people's suggestions) as a seperate file. If I were to send this essay I would send the essay REV ace is back :-). And, although I may not send this one to Harvard, it will probably go somewhere. But thanks a lot!</p>
<p>PM it here</p>
<p>powerrangers:
send it to me as well, I will read it.</p>