Anyone want to read an essay?

College Essays
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<p>Funny story on how I got the idea to write it. You'll understand once you read. Any critique or advise or yes's or no's or cliches or anythings would be nice. I just hope it's original enough and my personality comes across. My main question is do you feel like you see my personality in this essay? Respond and I'll PM you the essay. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it for you if you're comfortable.</p>

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<p>Ill read if you want me to.</p>

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<p><em>raises hand</em> I'll critique it.</p>

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<p>I'll tear it apart for you. ;]</p>

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<p>I'll read it :)</p>

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<p>okay, i'm currently in the process of revising but I might pm one or two of you. thanks</p>

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<p>I've been revising my sister's apps forever
for a college apps course</p>

<p>I'll be waiting to rip it up <em>evil smile</em></p>

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<p>i love reading essays...i'll read it :D</p>