Anyone want to read (and critique) an unusual college essay?

College Essays
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<p>This is for UChicago. I chose essay option 6 (write your own question) and am hoping to have my question used next year. </p>

<p>So, it's a completely original UChicago style question and answer, and I need some other thoughts. </p>

<p>Caveat: I will only send the essay to you if I see evidence in your posts that you are not applying this year from before I made this thread. I'm sorry, but I don't want to risk getting my question or answer stolen. And if I send it to you, please, please, please don't pass it around. </p>

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<p>I’ll love to! I’m applying this year to UChicago too, but I’m already happy with what my essay is about. I’m writing about the untranslatable words, so I don’t have an ulterior motive to scam you out of your question. If you want to be more assured, you can take a look at mine so far. </p>

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<p>I can read it if you want but I’m also applying this year, not applying to Uchicago though so your call.</p>

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<p>I can read it – you can check out my posting history as jphes (no Y) on Reddit if you want more evidence that I won’t steal your essay.</p>

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<p>I will be applying to colleges this year but not to Uchicago. Either way, I’d love to read your essay :)</p>