<p>Whoever's up for giving me solid and constructive criticism on my essays, please feel free to post down below, and I'll PM you. I encourage you to be as critical as possible, as long as your advice is constructive and makes sense. Also, I'm only sending them to UCLA students or alumni. Which means no HS kids! I need advice from people who have already gone through the college app process. Thanks!</p>
<p>I can critique it. I’m a freshie at UCLA :)</p>