<p>I just finished writing the first draft of my common app essay and was wondering if anyone would mind critiquing it? It is very rough and needs to be polished. Any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>I will read it. If you don’t want to send it to me (being a rising senior), that’s fine. If you would like my opinion, though, I am here.</p>
<p>Sure I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I am just adding a few more points and will pm both of you by the end of today. Thanks for the help.</p>
<p>I would like to read it too. Just wondering, which colleges are you applying to? Oh, and I am a rising junior, so no worries here.</p>
<p>Sure, I’d look to put in my two cents. Rising senior as well!</p>
<p>like* to put in my two cents.</p>
<p>Feel free to PM it to me, as I can offer some advice. (I’m transferring to Brown this fall, if that means anything.)</p>