anyone want to read my Common App essay? it's quite interesting :]

College Essays
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<p>hey does anyone want to critique my essay that i used on the common app?
it's already been read many times by my two english teachers from last year, but i wanted some other outside input.
thanks!</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it, PM me if you want</p>

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<p>PM me if u don't mind~</p>

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<p>pm me if you want as well, I would love to help</p>

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<p>PM me!! I am glad to help you^_^!!</p>

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<p>sure, but only if it's interesting</p>

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<p>yo puedo ayudar.</p>

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<p>yeah, send it to me too; i'll read it and tell you what i think :)</p>

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<p>I can help you judge whether it is interesting. PM me!</p>

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<p>yeah PM me!!</p>

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<p>ooh, I'm curious. PM it on over!</p>

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<p>me? :]</p>

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<p>sure send i over</p>

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<p>pm it over...ill read it over</p>

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<p>i'll read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it. PM me =)</p>

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<p>ill read as well...and also offer any criticism/compliments</p>

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<p>i'll read, pm me</p>

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<p>I'll do it for sure..shoot me a pm</p>

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<p>pm it over. but can you read mine too?</p>