Anyone want to read my essay?

<p>Hi, I'm looking for someone to read my common app essay which is in the topic of your choice category. I would prefer it if people who have experience in editing and really feel that they are qualified to critique a college essay would reply. I do appreciate the people who just like to read essays for fun, but this is incredibly serious, and I want suggestions that would really improve my essay and not just any-ol'-body's opinion. Thank You.</p>

<p>sure i can read it</p>

<p>ill read it</p>