<p>Hey guys I just drafted an essay that I think may be a winner!! I'll revisit it and alter the vocabulary of course, but I wanted to get opinions on what I have so far. Any takers?? I'd love the feedback.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it.</p>
<p>Have you read other essay, I just want to make sure my ideas don’t get copied or stolen, you know?</p>
<p>@jpheys </p>
<p>I’ll read it for you. All of my essays are already nearly finished so you don’t have to worry about me stealing ideas.</p>
<p>I’ve edited college application essays professionally and provided publicly viewable feedback on Reddit. You can check out my posting history there under username jphes (with no Y) if you want to verify.</p>
<p>sure I can read it</p>
<p>okay send it :)</p>
<p>i can read it as well.</p>
<p>I can read it</p>
<p>Okay thanks guys for all the offers, I’ve sent it out to a couple people!!</p>
<p>I’ll read it and give feedback if you want. </p>
<p>I’ll read and give you feedback. PM me :)</p>
<p>Okay I’ve decided that I might want to write about the first time I went to portfolio day in tenth grade. I was extremely unprepared for it and didn’t realize how serious and professional it is. I think this is a good idea but I just don’t know how to start the essay, I tried many times and just can’t come up with a good intro, ideas???</p>
<p>be all “i was ready. i had meticulously prepared blah blah blah di blah for portfolio for blah di blah blah. yet when i got there, i realized that i was v unprepared and that my stuff was blah di blah compared to others’ blah di blahs, which ranged from blah blah to blah blah blah.” just word it more eloquently and be more detailed maybe? idk though.</p>
<p>Hello I am a Duke alumni interviewer and would be willing to read. Send me PM. </p>