Anyone want to read my essay?

<p>I have an essay that's just short of 500 words. I'm trying to decide it it's any good or if it's not really getting much across. </p>

<p>I have another essay too that's roughly 750 words if anyone would be willing to check that one out too. </p>

<p>Let me know if you'd be willing to read either. Thanks!!</p>

<p>Schools it would be used for:</p>

<p>UChicago
Grinnell
Swarthmore
Yale
UNC Chapel Hill</p>

<p>apparently not....</p>

<p>Wrong forum.</p>

<p>ah, thanks. Sorry, I'm new.</p>