<p>I just need critique, as soon as possible and everything. They’re the penultimate draft so I don’t expect much. Maybe a grammar check or something.</p>
<p>post a 10char for a pm</p>
<p>pm it to me and i will read it.</p>
<p>pm it to me i will be glad to read it ...lol :D</p>
<p>I didn't get any feedback, careful guys</p>