Anyone want to read my horrible essay?

Applying to College
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<p>Anyone want to read my essay? I wrote it about my Palestinian background. It's an essay for UMich. This was the prompt: </p>

<p>Essay #1 (Required for all applicants. Approximately 250 words.)</p>

<p>Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.</p>

<p>Let me know if you want to read it.</p>

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<p>Anyone want to?</p>

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<p>Lol…well since you sold it so well. I will read it, I have been working on the same one:) Just finished although I have two and now cannot decide which to use. The UMich students on here were really helpful and I got like 10 opinions. Hopefully I can help you out too. PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I can try to help.</p>