Anyone want to read my roommate essay? (Transfer applicant)

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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I wrote three versions and I guess I need to choose one.
Any help with choosing/editing will be greatly appreciated!
PM me or reply below!

Thanks!

2

I’ll take a look and try to help

3

I will take a look, I write pretty good essays ( my teachers also said so)

4

You can give me all 3 or the best one, doesnt matter

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Sure! I can also help.