Anyone want to read my Spanish essay?

<p>I posted this in High School Life also, but I realize a lot of people don't go there.</p>

<p>I am writing an essay for Spanish class and was wondering if someone could please proofread it. Please only offer to proofread it if you are a native or are very proficient...sorry, but I know it can be hard to judge grammar if you are a fairly unexperienced student. My teacher is very picky, so she looks for things like not putting words like "a" or "de" after certain verbs, etc.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance. If you offer, I'll PM it to you.</p>