<p>I need help with my UC essay, but my english teachers are too busy. One of my English teachers is going through pregnancy too..</p>
<p>Anyways, can someone read my essay and give me constructive criticism? I'll message it to you. </p>
<p>Much appreciated and be harsh if that's easier.</p>
<p>Sure, feel free to message me! I hope you don’t mind if I’m brutal xP</p>
<p>Sure, pm me!</p>
<p>Sure! Pm.</p>
<p>Sent from my HTC One X using CC</p>
<p>Thanks guys! ill send it in two hours because im still editting myself.</p>
<p>yes, i can read it for you, PM me</p>
<p>I’ll give it a read and help out if you’d like!</p>
<p>I’ll read it for ya!</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you still need more feedback on it</p>
<p>I’d like to but I cannot use PM…</p>
<p>why cant you use pm?</p>
<p>Finished and gave you comments via CC email. He can’t pm because he does not have 15 posts on the forum. That’s also why I sent it via CC email. Tell me if you don’t receive it.</p>
<p>ohh okay. ill just send it thru email for him. </p>
<p>Thanks for your comments drakorising, it was really helpful!</p>