Anyone want to read my UC essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm looking for some people to help me improve it and wanting some feedbacks from what I have wrote so far for UC essay prompt #1 - Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

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<p>Pm me, I’ll give it a read !</p>

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<p>I can! PM me!</p>

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<p>both PMed :slight_smile: and Thanks although it might not be good at all, really a rough draft at this moment.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>PMed :slight_smile: Thanks</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to read it.
I’m applying this year, so PM only if that is NOT a deterrent.</p>

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<p>any feedbacks yet on my essay although it’s pretty bad… XD</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it :)</p>

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<p>PM me :slight_smile: I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>PMed and thanks everyone =]</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you are still looking for someone.</p>

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<p>I’ll read and give feedback if you need more, but looks like you’ve got quite a few</p>

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<p>PMed both =]</p>