<p>Whoever wants to read and offer some feedback (any amount is fine), post below or PM me and I'll PM it to you. Also, sorry if I sound smug but I feel like I have a really creative way of conveying my message in this essay. As a result, I'm only going to send it to people who have already graduated high school and gone through the college app process already =/</p>
<p>ill read it</p>