Anyone want to read over my Spanish essay?

<p>I am writing an essay for Spanish class and was wondering if someone could please proofread it. Please only offer to proofread it if you are a native or are very proficient...sorry, but I know it can be hard to judge grammar if you are a fairly unexperienced student. My teacher is very picky, so she looks for things like not putting words like "a" or "de" after certain verbs, etc.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance. If you offer, I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>If by proficient you mean a person in spanish V IB, I can look at it if you want- just pm me. :)</p>

<p>I'll do it- spanish IV IB (and i have the only A in class)</p>

<p>Thanks for offering, guys, but I ended up just finishing and turning in the essay.</p>