<p>I can give some critics if you still need some help.</p>
<p>pm me as well</p>
<p>lol @ kid volunteering to look after deadline</p>
<p>Sure. Would very happy to give my feedbacks. PM me</p>
<p>I already sent my essays so I don't need help anymore. Thanks everyone :D</p>
<p>haha sure you can pm me</p>
<p>woah i want to read it. PM~!!</p>