Anyone wants to look over my Brown&RISD essay?

<p>I had little time to complete this essay before the Brown ED deadline, and now it’s time for me to submit it to RISD and I just want to perfect it…I guess it’s pretty placid – but I managed to put all the opinions I want to express in. Anyone wants to read?</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to read it over. PM me</p>