Anyone wants to read my essay?

<p>I chose the prompt: "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. "</p>

<p>I finished it a couple of days ago and I've been rereading it and correcting a few things. Now I just want some honest opinion from some of you guys. What do you think? Would you read it? Thanks</p>

<p>bump</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. PM it over</p>