Anyone willing to critique my essays (common app and Columbia)?

College Essays
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<p>I have two common app ones (deciding between them) and three Columbia supplements done and I was wondering if any of you could help critique/edit them. I would prefer someone who has already been admitted, already attending university or not applying to Columbia to critique them. Just tell me which one you want to critique (or all :) ) and I'll PM them over.</p>

<p>Thank you in advance :)</p>

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<p>bump (10 char)</p>

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<p>I will, just PM me!</p>

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<p>@ashleigha - did you get my responses? Just making sure because I think my PMs is having problems.</p>

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<p>I’ll be willing to.</p>