Anyone willing to critique my "Why NYU" essay?

[idkhelp101]

Just lemme know and I’ll pm it!

[bohemianfrenchie]

I’m willing to critique it.

[snoopy906]

i’ll love to read your essay. feel free to pm me

[somerandomuser]

sure, Im currently a NYU freshmen. I can critique your essay.

[superhay]

I got accepted to NYU ED! PM me if you want