Anyone willing to edit my essay?

Hi, I’m an international student applying to universities this year. I just finished my first draft of common App essay. Anyone can give me some critique please?Thank you!!

where is it??

Ooops, sorry, I mean if anyone is willing to critique mine, I could pm them my essay :stuck_out_tongue:

hey! I could :slight_smile:

I will, PM me!

Bump!

I can read it!

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