Anyone willing to give me some feedback on my CommonApp essay?

<p>I'm really struggling with it... I have 2 possible drafts that I'm considering. I'd really appreciate any feedback! Especially by college people whose essays already got them in last year! Haha thanks :)</p>

<p>come on guys, please? I’ll gladly edit someone else’s in return! We can do a trade!</p>

<p>sure :slight_smile: pm it over</p>