Anyone willing to give my Common App essay a read?

It took me forever to decide on a topic, and I’ve finally completed a rough draft. I was wondering if some of you would read it and share your thoughts and criticism. f you would like to, either comment or PM me. Thank you so much in advance!

Hello - I’m a Duke alumni interviewer and would be willing to read. Send PM.

@sgopal2 can you give mine a read? Pleassse its the common app prompt 2

@fafarrukh sorry for hijacking your thread I’m really nervous and really need a second opinion.

@sandra6775 please send PM. Not nice to hijack another thread.