<p>I wrote my DBQ that is due tomorrow. I am rather new at these things and would like to know what some of you think. (preferably those who have had APUSH, but it's okay if you haven't.) It's only five paragraphs and I need someone to make sure it's strong enough and maybe check for grammatical errors etc. I would appreciate it. PM me or post your name here if you are willing to read it. I have the question and the documents if you need them.<br>
Thanks.</p>
<p>Anyone? I don't mean to be naggy, but even if you just skim it over and check for things, that'd be great.</p>
<p>Dbq?????????</p>
<p>Document Based Question... You read some documents and then answer the question using the documents you were given as support.</p>
<p>i'll do it peaches. i took apush last year and got a 5 on the exam. so i think i may be semi-qualified to look it over.</p>
<p>I can if you want...I'm in AP US History this year, but took Euro last yar so feel pretty confident with DBQ's.</p>
<p>the thing is i need to see the documents to grade ur paper. so kind of tough just by reading it.</p>
<p>Dont' fret on the DBQ. It's handwritten and shouldn't be revised by anyone since in the real test you only get about an hour to write it.</p>
<p>Yeah, but my teacher said that we need to edit it and should have someone else edit it, she'll probably use it as a test even though she said this time the grading will be easier. This is only Honors US 2, AP is next year, but she's using an AP DBQ prompt.</p>
<p>peaches i used to have people critique my DBQs all the time. and i still did extremely well on the exam, so don't worry about it.</p>
<p>OK thank you</p>
<p>it's a good experience.
I took APUSH while taking ESL so i really had no idea what i was writing. But through critiques and the teacher helping me I raised my DBQ/essay grade and eventaully got a five.
GO STEELERS!!</p>