Anyone willing to look at my extended essay??

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Chicago ✅
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Hey guys,

Could anyone look at my essay and give me some feedback?? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VYaw3pMCi0DGm6X5h8u3rUXy5rZ5Gu7sRYuXl5tm_nI/edit

I applied ED, but I don’t think I have a chance to get in for the ED round…

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VYaw3pMCi0DGm6X5h8u3rUXy5rZ5Gu7sRYuXl5tm_nI/edit?usp=sharing

sorry that was the wrong link

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REMOVE THIS IMMEDIATELY. If anybody copies your essay and sends it in you’ll be flagged for plagarism and your application will be nullified.

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@zzzccch : @Coldsummer123 is correct. Throw yourself on the mercy of the moderators. You can message me your essay (Reed '74 Boalt Hall '77) and I will be happy to comment.