Anyone willing to look at Short Answer Paragraph?

<p>Hello all,</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone can take a look at my Short Answer Paragraph for USC? Essay writing is not generally my strength so i think it would be a smart idea to have it checked over before i submit it later this weekend. Feel free to message me yours as well!</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it, though I am not sure if I can respond with some feedback tonight. Just PM it to me and I’ll respond as soon as I can.</p>

<p>you can send it to me if you still need a reader</p>

<p>PM me. I will be able to provide some feedback.</p>

<p>I’m making a few minor updates on it… and im not at home right now (essay is on my flash drive) so i can message it to you guys tommorow morning-afternoonish if your’e still interested</p>

<p>I would be willing to read it and give you back some feedback, if you still want more people to look over it.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. PM me :)</p>

<p>I’ll have it to you tommorow afternoonish, i gotta make revisions from some fellow CCers remarks but im way to sick right now to change them >_></p>

<p>sure i’ll look it over</p>