Anyone willing to look my essay over? :)

<p>I have a general personal statement, but I fear that the tone (simplicity = good, progress = moral and social deterioration) will contradict the fact that I plan to be a doctor. My H. English teacher last year gave me the only 100% out of the class, but I’m still iffy about using it. </p>

<p>So far I may be using it for MSU (in-state safety, but the Med Scholars program is a reach) and Brown, which is a definite reach.</p>

<p>Any constructive criticism you could give me is appreciated. :)</p>

<p>If you’re interested just post here and I’ll PM it to you. This thread is essentially crossposted in the College Admissions forum so if it looks familiar… that’s why. ;)</p>

<p>Oh, and if possible, I’d love it if any of you current students/alums would be willing to take a look as well.</p>

<p>i'll read it!</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>pm me 10 char</p>

<p>ill read it</p>