Anyone willing to look over my essay?

Hi! I’m looking for someone to read my common app essay (prompt #1). I feel wary about asking my friends because they either don’t give me enough criticism, or they don’t say much at all.

It would be much appreciated!

PM me! I’d be glad to help

id love to help!!

I’ll read it, too. I’m the mother of 2 Ds; one in college now and one in HS. I’m new to CC so I’m not sure how you would send it to me.

Send it over.