anyone willing to proof my personal statement?

<p>I'd be really thankful. It's due in.. an hour and a half.</p>

<p>post in parents forum</p>

<p>Um, i'll read yours if you'll read mine.</p>

<p>oh, pm me if you're interested. i'll read yours first</p>

<p>ahhh i don't have time to edit, I'm really sorry ;[ BUMP</p>

<p>i'll take a look</p>

<p>bump !! ! !</p>

<p>ahhhhh bump</p>