Anyone willing to proofread my commonapp essay?

<p>Post here and I'll PM you in a bit.</p>

<p>This is for EA!!</p>

<p>P.S. - Please be as brutally honest as possibly but keep in mind that I don't have much time to make serious changes. I want constructive criticism. :)</p>

<p>Also, could you tell me which topic to label it as?</p>

<p>I’m not sure what category it fits into…</p>

<p>Someone? Please? The deadline is tomorrow night… :(</p>

<p>Pretty sure for Nov 1st, the deadline is tonight, unless youre applying to different schools than me! Also, I’ll proofread yours if you proofread mine! I also dont have time for big changes, but would love advice. Also please try to point out anything that I could cut out, because its about 80 words too long.</p>

<p>Sure! Mine’s also a little long. :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it and help you make some changes.</p>

<p>I’ll proofread yours if you proofread mine also! PM me :)</p>

<p>@hvw9794,
I think it’s actually due by midnight 11/1 (as in 1 minute before 11/2) but i’m going to try to submit it tonight just in case.
Apparently each college also has a grace period for late applications.</p>

<p>@everyone,
I sent it to you all. Did you get it?</p>

<p>Hopefully sure pm me if you will thanks</p>

<p>Can someone please look over my short answer as well?
I’m 174 characters over the limit (with spaces).</p>

<p>My deadline was extended!
Anyone else willing to proofread it?</p>

<p>Sure, pm me it</p>

<p>Yes you can pm.</p>

<p>Thanks! :slight_smile: I sent it.</p>