<p>if anyone can read my essay and critique it critically i could really use your help!
i'm not really the greatest writer (math/science is more my thing) so if would be willing to help i would be so grateful.</p>
<p>thanks in advance!</p>
<p>pretty please??</p>
<p>PM me if you need help.</p>
<p>thanks guys :)
anyone else?</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm me :)</p>