anyone willing to read and comment 250 words?

Applying to College
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<p>i was wondering if anyone can help me make my essay a bit better. it is just 250 words (very short) and quite interesting (i hope). any help would be appreciated...thanks</p>

<p>((i am quite nervous at essay writing))</p>

<p>merci...</p>

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<p>please??? :)</p>

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<p>I will read it- pm me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too.</p>

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<p>anyone else??</p>

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<p>I will also read it - Just pm me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'l read it . PM me also........</p>