Anyone willing to read and criticize my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Hello :) i am a new member and this is my first thread, and i would to know if anyone would be willing to read my common app essay. I am an international student so i am not familiar with writing essays in english so any help would be very appreciated!</p>

<p>Thank you in advance :)</p>

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<p>anyone please ?</p>

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<p>no one ? i really need help</p>

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<p>Yes I can</p>

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<p>i could help as well</p>

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<p>Sure!</p>

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<p>Send it along if you want feedback.</p>