Anyone willing to read/comment on my transfer essay?

Transfer Students
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<p>I'm actually not completely finished with it yet, but the bulk of it is finished and I'm looking for advice on whether I'm going in the right direction. If anyone's willing I'd really appreciate it.</p>

2

<p>sure pm me..finished my transfer applications 2 uf and unc</p>

3

<p>pm me, ill take a look</p>

4

<p>sure i'll take a look if you pm it.</p>

5

<p>sure pm me.</p>

6

<p>sure, pm me if you like : )</p>

7

<p>me too, pm me.</p>

8

<p>PM me. :) I'll also take a looksie.</p>