Anyone willing to read & fix my Personal Essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Just not anyone who's applying to colleges this year...</p>

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<p>Try the essay forum instead: [College</a> Essays - College Confidential](<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/]College”>College Essays - College Confidential Forums)</p>

<p>^_^</p>