Anyone willing to read my $1,000 college scholarship essay and critique it???

<p>The essay prompt is:
-How applicant became interested in this particular intellectual or artistic area.
-What the experiences the applicant has had related to this passion.
-How the applicant's chosen plan of study will further develop this outstanding achievement. </p>

<p>Essay of one to three pages</p>

<p>The deadline is February 15, 2009.</p>

<p>Please tell me if your interested in critiquing my essay, I will PM you! ;)</p>

<p>Can someone please edit my essay?</p>

<p>i can give it a try</p>

<p>pm it over</p>

<p>Sure. Go ahead and PM it!</p>