<p>I think its very unique, but I need help connecting it back to the prompt more. Criticism would be very helpful!</p>
<p>Here’s the Prompt:
C. French novelist Anatole France wrote: “An education isn’t how much you have committed to memory, or even how much you know. It’s being able to differentiate between what you do know and what you don’t.” What don’t you know?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to give you some honest feedback.</p>
<p>Id be happy as well to read and give some constructive crit.</p>
<p>I will. That’s a great prompt - I wish I had done it!</p>
<p>Hey, PM it to me. I’ll be glad to review it :)</p>
<p>I’d be glad to. I already applied ED so don’t worry if you think I’m going to plagiarize it.</p>
<p>I can read and crit it too. I’ve already applied as well</p>
<p>I’ll read it. Yale SCEAer and not applying to Brown here.</p>
<p>PM me, I can give you feed back (:</p>
<p>I’ll read it, I already submitted my app to Brown so no worries about plagiarism :)</p>
<p>I’d be glad to give it a read.</p>
<p>I don’t think he has sent it out to anybody yet…</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I think seant926 is afraid people will copy his essays lol Perfectly understandable.
Well, I’m done my essays so that’s not what I’m trying to do. I just wanted to give my honest opinion since I love editing other people’s writing :)</p>
<p>I applied last week; I’ll do it if you need me too.</p>
<p>I’m kind of known for revising stuff throughout my school.</p>
<p>sorry guys! I haven’t been onto this thread in a while and I decided Im going to try to tackle a different prompt after rereading my essay. I just feel like it doesn’t show a lot about me, and I like putting a lot of personality into my writing. I’ll be sure to post again when I complete my next one. Again, truely sorry!</p>
<p>I’ll read it! i just applied about two weeks ago and wrote this essay and had it revised for me about a million times, pm it to me.</p>