Anyone willing to read my common app essay [draft?]

I have no idea what to write about for my common app essay but I had a (kind of dumb/unimpressive) idea and decided to just start writing - I’m only half way through my draft, because I’m not sure if I should keep going or just ditch the idea (so it sounds really bad so far)
I’d appreciate if anyone’s willing to take a look and give me some feedback? Let me know if you’re interested and I’ll PM you my draft

I can help if you want!

I can help with editing/brainstorming (thinking of essay ideas is a ton of fun!), PM me

PM me. I’ll edit yours if you edit mine.