Anyone willing to read my Common App essay? =)

<p>Hello CC-ers!</p>

<p>I just finished typing up a common app essay. I chose this prompt: Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?</p>

<p>I have another essay for the common app, but I wanted to write a response to this one just in case if it might be better. If anyone is willing to read it, please comment or PM me, and I'll send you my essay! This isn't a polished version (because I just finished typing it), but I would like to know if my organization, grammar, etc is alright. I'm not sure how clearly I showed what I learned from my failures and if I could get some input on that, that would be wonderful. </p>

<p>Your feedback is much appreciated!</p>