Anyone willing to read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi! I'm really new here, trying not to get overwhelmed, but would anyone be willing to critique my first common app essay? </p>

<p>I would love to know what impression it leaves a reader with/how I come off in the essay. Any other comments, suggestions, criticisms, thoughts, etc. would also be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Thanks! :)</p>

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<p>Pm me…</p>

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<p>message me :)</p>

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<p>PM me, I would love to read and comment.</p>

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<p>sure I’ll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, just PM it to me :)</p>

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<p>did you pm me yet i have to go</p>