<p>At first I liked my idea for my CommonApp essay, but am not sure whether it works so well after all. I'd really need an outsider opinion on it.</p>
<p>Is anyone willing to read it and provide me with some brief feedback?</p>
<p>want to trade essays?
I'll critique your's, you correct mine. :]</p>
<p>I'll read.</p>
<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>