anyone willing to read my essay??

<p>pleeeease? :) </p>

<p>i just need someone to edit/critique my two essays for the university of michigan! or, if you don't have that much time, you can do just one! </p>

<p>first prompt: Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. </p>

<p>second: Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests?</p>

<p>neither are very long and pretty much just need to be read for surface errors (i.e. punctuation, grammar, etc...)</p>

<p>pretty pretty please! :)</p>

<p>I’ll read them both.</p>

<p>sent! let me know if you got it :)</p>