Anyone willing to read my transfer essay?

Transfer Students
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<p>I know it's pretty late for applying but I started a little late and St. John's has rolling admission... I've sent in my materials but I'm still working on my essays which I hope to complete soon. If all doesn't work I'm planning to apply for spring admission.</p>

<p>It's the Common Application essay, and there's a separate supplement for the school so the essay is somewhat generic.
If anyone is willing to read over it and give me some comments I would be really thankful!</p>

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<p>hey,
feel free to pm me. I’ll be a freshman next year, but am thinking of transferring, so send it if you feel comfortable and I’ll tell you what i think</p>

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<p>Thank you. I’ll send it over :)</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Yeah, I’ll read it. PM it to me:)</p>

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<p>I am willing to read it too. Just PM it to me if you want :)</p>

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<p>il read it… pm me</p>

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<p>Hmm, you should get a writing tutor. No offense, but some people could plagiarize your work so I don’t think CC is a reliable source to get help with your papers.</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to read your essay pm me</p>

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<p>thank you everyone! </p>

<p>lavender19: I guess that could happen… but the essays are pretty specific to my circumstance so I’m thinking it’ll be hard to plagiarize and I think the comments I receive will be benefit me more than not. but thanks for the advice :)</p>